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07 -02 -2009, 03:35 AM
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togather with the Acadamic Writing
hi Everybody
 i hope i'm not boring .gif "ma (9)") because i'm writing alot here.so please stand me and i hope to be more useful than being talkativeMy dear Friend لؤلؤة الخليج told about one of her brainstorming idea.she told me that we should improve our writing techniques.also she told me that we can do that by writing paragraphs and correct them in the topic.so i think that the best thing is to start a new topic learning all how to write about acadamic writing.so by this topic i'll offer a free lessons for those who wants to get higher in their writing techniques. just please let me think a little to know how i should start. thank you for your understanding the importance of English language in our life. see you soon when the topic is ready .gif "majdah (7)")
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07 -02 -2009, 04:29 AM
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رد: togather with the Acadamic Writing
Hi every body Today we are going to start a new idea, which it is how to write in an academic way First of all , I will tell you about the definition of academic writing. Academic writing is the writing that is required for colleges and universities. Of course, it differs from other personal writing like literary, journalistic, and business writing. just to make sure that you understand the meaning of academic writing. it is the writing that we write in schools, colleges , and universities. The difference between this kind of writing the personal writing that this kind of writing is forwarded for a specific audience. The audience here is professors and instructors. By this short introduction, we can start our course. In general, to be a good writer you have to be admitted to specific conditions or specific steps. First of all, we need to know how to write a paragraph then we’ll start by the 2nd step which is the essay. Knowing how to write a paragraph is very essential to write an essay. Now we will start by writing a paragraph. How should we write a paragraph? As we all know that writing a paragraph needs some rules. First, we should know what the paragraph is. Paragraph is a short part of words that contains three parts. Paragraph: 1- Introduction 2- Body 3- Conclusion To write a paragraph we have to take into consideration these 3 elements. Now we’ll start by the introduction Introduction Introduction contains the main idea of your paragraph. We always start by what we call the topic sentence. Topic sentence is a sentence that directs your subject. it contains what we call it the controlling idea. Controlling idea is the branches of our subject. For example: Smoking is very dangerous for three reasons. Here we have the topic sentence with the controlling idea. The topic sentence is (smoking is dangerous) and the controlling idea is  three reasons)I think now the introduction is clear. Body Now we’ll move on the body. The body is the explaining of the controlling idea. In the body we explain and write the reasons of the danger of smoking The conclusion The conclusion is the part in the paragraph that ends your paragraph. You can write one sentence or two to end your subject. Now by this simple explanation we can write a nice paragraph. I’ll sum on what I’ve wrote .to write a paragraph you have to write in its three elements The elements are: 1- Introduction 2- Body 3- Conclusion Now you can try to write a paragraph easily. I am waiting for your paragraph to be corrected. I want to say that if there will be any assistants, i will be glad to help. I wish I was useful i didn’t revise, correct me if there are mistakes references: Writing academic English (third Edition) waiting for yor paragraphs remember that i’m here for you and only for you YOURS COME BACK TO ME
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07 -02 -2009, 05:55 AM
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رد: togather with the Acadamic Writing
hi
there is a mistake in the title of the topic.it's the A in word ACADAMIC the right spelling is ACADEMIC sorry for this mistake.
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07 -02 -2009, 06:40 PM
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Hi This my topic I am waiting your opinionMy Brother you did a great job in this topic to define how we can write Internet The Internet makes the world a smaller place. We can know many Thing from that small Computer screen which view useful information Another important characteristic to waste our free time on good way Also a method of getting in touch with friends and family, and somewhere to go to find information about almost anything imaginable And the Internet can make you more educative In conclusion the Worlds became small village Yours
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة لؤلؤة المحيط ; 07 -02 -2009 الساعة 06:49 PM |
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07 -02 -2009, 11:11 PM
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رد: togather with the Acadamic Writing
Internet The(you don’t have to say the because we all know internet without say the) Internet makes the(no need for article) world a smaller(small only without ER) place.(i said that we have to start the paragraph by the topic sentence) We can know manyThings from that small Computer screen which views useful information.Another important characteristic is to waste(it’s wrong to say waste because when you waste something you don’t make use of it.you can try make-use or fill up) our free time on(in) a good way.it’sAlso a method of getting in touch with friends and family, and(it’s a place to find information)somewhere to go(no need for the verb go) to find information about almost(almost means not completely )anything imaginableAnd (you have to put a full stop and begin a new sentence)the Internet can (no need for can)make you more educative(it’s educated)In conclusion,( the nicest thing you did in your paragraph) the Worlds (we’ve one world that’s connected to the internet so you have to say world)became small village. My dear friend لؤلؤة الخليج It’s really nice to see you the first participant in this topic.it’s a nice try you have the most important vocabulary for you paragraph, so you are almost done. For this reason, you have just to be aware of some grammatical points and for the rules of writing. For example: You want to speak about Internet. You can start for example: Internet is the most important technology in our life for these reasons(topic sentence with it controlling idea).then you start telling your reader about the reasons.then as you did you write in the End: Finally or in conclusion. This is all about the rules of writing an academic paragraph.now we’ll move to the grammatical side. 1- You have to be careful for sentences because each sentence you write must be (Subject+verb+complement)with theses three element you can create a correct sentence. 2- article in English is not used as the same in arabic. 3- We can’t start sentences with (also-and-but ...etc) See you around
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07 -02 -2009, 11:13 PM
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رد: togather with the Acadamic Writing
hi everybody
waiting for other paragraphs
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08 -02 -2009, 12:28 AM
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Thanks so much for your advise I were so bad I promise you to be more careful another time This is the revisal copy Internet Do you have a computer with internet cables that makes you a part of a huge .World Wide Web in this big village Internet makes the world a small place . we can know many thing from that small Computer screen which views useful information . Another important characteristic is to fill up our free time a good way it’s also a method of getting in touch with friends and family Then it’s a place to find information somewhere to find information about many thing imaginable And the it’s a place to find informationsomewhere it’s a place to find informationsomewhere educated In conclusion World became small village Best wishes for you
Yours I Add the topic sentence
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08 -02 -2009, 01:02 AM
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hi لؤلؤة الخليج
you are not bad.really you are good. please as i told you you have committed the same mistakes again. you have to start your paragraph with the topic idea that forward the subject.please read again the correction and write it again c y
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09 -02 -2009, 08:36 PM
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رد: togather with the Acadamic Writing
hey there
i'm waiting for new paragraphs the next eposide will be posted soon.it's on how to write an academic writing with new details
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09 -02 -2009, 09:17 PM
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thank you for there information they are the start and good start it mis la base in french............i writen som ones which i had not know .....thank you
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10 -02 -2009, 04:15 AM
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رد: togather with the Acadamic Writing
hi Naima
it's very nice of you and it is in the same time an honour to me to reply to my topic. i wish i had them in French but i still a tyro(beginner)in french.i hope you all the best in your university and in your learning English c y
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27 -05 -2009, 06:16 PM
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hello thank you please in arabic
god bless you .gif "ma (27)")
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